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Old 02-12-2009   #31
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Brotha, could you post the trailer on YouTube also?
I'm having problems playing with media programs.
I had it up, but YouTube took it down due to copyright issues.
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Old 02-20-2009   #32
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Can't wait Brotha..I will be the first to watch!
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Woo, hope it's going good! I already saw it on TheGTAPlace, I want to be one of the first to watch!!!
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It's here guys!

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The beach scene was freakin' great.
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Nice work Brotha, wasn't too bad at all, ending was actually quite nice as was the airport runway scene.
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Watching now, want me to change the thread title for you? To let people know it's out?
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Hey, Brotha...

Your Machinima's intro was well-done, but the action scenes could do with some camera shake. And why is it that before every scene it pauses for a few seconds? I don't know if it's Vimeo or your video, but it's fine anyway.

My suggestion is: just try not to use the default camera angles, use the free camera (ALWAYS) as the result is better and doesn't feel gimmicky, as I've found out for myself. I know it's rather difficult as the camera will reset itself, but, yea.

And, also try to use camera shake as well, in car chase scenes and fast, action scenes, so that it will be more interesting. Ease in and Ease out also works great sometimes. Try to move your camera too, it stays too still during the first scene, which makes it look uninteresting! Also, to avoid lots of graphical bugs in your video, try to switch the resolution to 800x600 with all options down and render it - the bugs will be minimized.

Good job though, especially some of the voice acting, but take some of my suggestions. I would do one of these but I'm really busy this year, maybe next year. But maybe with some improvements you would get featured on magazines again, just keep up your good work!
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Decent mini movie however I believe the soundtrack could have been better aswell with the camera angles. I will admit you had some genius angles but I found the most part to be repeating techniques. This mini movie also gave me a new appriciation for voice actors. I thought it was an easy job but you proved otherwise.

Some questions: *spoiler*
How does Niko find the black guy on the boat?
Taking the bus is a very common occurance. What if it had been someone else standing there at 11 instead of Johnny? How is Niko is sure.
And Did I miss something or does Niko not even find out why "some black guy" wanted him dead?

I might sound like a cack but at the end of the day I give you props cuz if I were to try to make a mini movie it wouldnt live up to be 1/8 of this!

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Decent mini movie however I believe the soundtrack could have been better aswell with the camera angles. I will admit you had some genius angles but I found the most part to be repeating techniques. This mini movie also gave me a new appriciation for voice actors. I thought it was an easy job but you proved otherwise.

Some questions: *spoiler*
How does Niko find the black guy on the boat?
Taking the bus is a very common occurance. What if it had been someone else standing there at 11 instead of Johnny? How is Niko is sure.
And Did I miss something or does Niko not even find out why "some black guy" wanted him dead?

I might sound like a cack but at the end of the day I give you props cuz if I were to try to make a mini movie it wouldnt live up to be 1/8 of this!

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Thank you Kal.

1. When Johnny tells Niko that "Only God can find him (the boss) where his now" Niko takes it that the guy's heavily guarded, and that you need to have access to some heavy stuff to find him. Niko then steals the helicopter cause it has some sophisticated tracking system that the NOOSE uses, that's how he finds him

2. As for Johnny, Niko knows him from before. As soon as Jackie said his name, he knew who he was, he just didn't know where because he's just a goon.

3. As for the black guy, the boss - wait and see.
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Of course, in the business you deal with, you gotta have some bad reviews.. unfortunately, I'm the one who'll deliver one. I appreciate your effort, I really do. Everything looks fairly good, but I gotta say, that's the worst voice-over I've ever seen. I'm not sure if you were giving the voices to the characters.. Firstly, all of the characters sound exactly the same. Second, the person who made the voice-overs (probably you) speaks bosnian or w/e like Bore Lee and that made me laugh, which isn't a good thing since you've tried to pull off a serious action movie. The script is poorly done, half the times I didn't understand what was happening and why it was happening. The idea isn't so special. Except these things, there are some good things, of course. But I have to congratulate you on doing something like this, it's obvious you've given yourself some work. No hard feelings, eh?

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