Old 08-14-2007   #1
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My Fan Art!

Hey everyone, I've been working on this picture for a
few hours
I know his left arm looks a bit unatural.
And I cant seem to get the damn hand right
But after i finish Niko himself i'll add the cop and the buildings in the backround
I'm not a great artist, but i used a thing my art teacher taught me by applying grid lines, so that's why they are there.
This is the first thing i've ever really tried to draw
tell me what you think, Just my way of waiting!
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c9...aHoe/GTAIV.jpg

I also am into photography, check it out for me!
www.blacksilver65.deviantart.com

I'm tired though. night

Edit: Here's a newer version.
http://blacksilver65.deviantart.com/...gress-62299250

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Old 08-14-2007   #2
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29 views and not one reply? cmon, someone tell me what you think!
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Old 08-14-2007   #3
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The head is too small - the proportions are wrong.
Also the heads shape is wrong, you should make it taller/higher.
There are other mistakes too.
The wrinkles on the closest hand are nice though (And wrinkles are hard to do right: D)
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Old 08-14-2007   #4
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Well thanks for the constructive critisism. But i dont plan to change anything with it because i dont really have any plans for it lol, just something i felt like doing for some practice. Perhaps when i'm older i'll make stuff for a reason lol. Thanks though

I've added some more if you want to see it.

http://blacksilver65.deviantart.com/...ess-2-62312549

Maybe i'll do some other stuff later this week. i dont know. this took me a while, and i'm not done yet
and i know the hand looks like crap lol, but i made the cops lip look a bit better.
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The head is too small - the proportions are wrong.
Also the heads shape is wrong, you should make it taller/higher.
There are other mistakes too.
The wrinkles on the closest hand are nice though (And wrinkles are hard to do right: D)
shit man I dun see your artwork anywhere picaso

I think it looks pretty good! Work in progress. Im sure final would look good. Keep working on it!
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Old 08-15-2007   #6
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shit man I dun see your artwork anywhere picaso

I think it looks pretty good! Work in progress. Im sure final would look good. Keep working on it!
Well aren't you dumb. Sorry to be so blunt, but geez. You don't need to be a good artist to see some obvious mistakes. And if i can get hold of a cam i can post my pics only for you (they're not about gta) and then you can f off.
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Old 08-18-2007   #7
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There is no need to be rude..
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Well aren't you dumb. Sorry to be so blunt, but geez. You don't need to be a good artist to see some obvious mistakes. And if i can get hold of a cam i can post my pics only for you (they're not about gta) and then you can f off.
wow ivar87,

you really need to watch how you talk, expect to get the same treatment back. I'm sure you'd like that. now "f" off.

BlackSilver65 - Your drawing looks nice, just a few tweak ups in the shapes and it'd look alot like the actual drawing your trying to draw. Keep it up mate and good job.

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Really nice! I like it you did very well on the shading too. Good work
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It's decent.
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Its all reallly good. I like how its all a work in progress.
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I guess you know nothing about art and criticism.. But okalydokaly, live in your dreamland.

Blacksilver, I suggest you to erase the head and try to do it all over.
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