I don't want to be the hater here Lukey but I'm gonna do it anyways.
I think you should pick better angles and use a shallower depth of field. I don't feel the tilt-shift/miniature feeling in a single shot in your video. Sometime it's almost there but it gets destroyed because of a tree or a building that's slightly in or out of focus.
The idea is cool but the execution could be a lot better. Keep trying, I'm sure you'll nail it!